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| Don't go in the woods by frodo16424 | 2 Review(s) |
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| TithenFeredir | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/10/2005 |
| Hmmmm,a very disturbing story, but it depicts something that had to be a reality in Mirkwood. The spiders are a thing that tends to be underplayed in fanfic. I finished this with the feeling that there was more to explore with this idea. Maybe, if careful to stay within the bounds of good taste, you could expand and elaborate on it and make it truly horrifying (in a good way). ~TF | |
| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/18/2004 |
| Very disturbing, in a good literary way, that is. If I have spider nightmares tonight, I'm blaming you. :) I noticed that midway you switch the narrator's pronoun from "we" to "I". I'm not sure what effect you were going for. Was it to highlight the sense of terror? Or have I missed something? | |