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The Falcon: The Adventures of Peregrin Took  by Tom Fairbairn 3 Review(s)
hobbit_lassReviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/13/2004
Glad to know the fate of the pirates at last, and the elf adds a whole new level to this adventure!

I really enjoyed the flashback at the end-

Great stuff!

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/8/2004
I am so glad to see Brogar again! I always like it when an old friend returns. I also loved the kite flash-back at the end of the chapter. Even then, Pippin was adventurous. I love that he didn't want to come down because he was enjoying the view. Oh, and he sees to have gotten over his dislike of girls since then. LOL
I think it is so interesting the way that Pippin can sometimes push Maglor out of his mind, but not entirely because of Maglor's strength and experience. I wonder if they will be on the same side in this or if things will take a nasty turn at some point. Can't wait to read more so I am going on to the next chapter.

purrlinReviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/8/2004
OK so Grey Wonderer isn't the only one enamoured with your work!

I am impressed!

I feel we're at the crossroads where all the characters to date will finally be bought together.

I love the idea of Maglor being around.... I'm desperate to know how your Captain of the pirate ship will fit in. What has happened to Davy and where will our beloved Pippin end up?

So many questions...so many tales left open ended...

I just feel there are so many chapters to come....what is Merry doing? and what about Aragorn? or Legolas or any other ot the more highly thought of elves for that matter? does not someone feel the continued action of Maglor?

I await your next chapters with baited breath...do not fail me, and leave me to torment unimaginable.

You do have a way of telling a story that makes one breathless....

Thank you!

purrlin :)

(I don't think I have ever considered Pippin such an heroic (and sexual) character! long live Hobbits!)



Author Reply: Re: your last comment -- LOL! Isn't he though? Well, I like to say, he's forty-one (human late twenties/early thirties) and this is swashbuckling adventure. He needs to be dashing and romantic. :-) Besides, Billy Boyd could pull it off. ;-)

Thank you for your review and hold on to your hat!

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