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Immortal  by Ruse 59 Review(s)
GalimerilReviewed Chapter: 20 on 11/9/2004
*tear* That was beautiful! I'm going to read this over again! This was a masterpiece. I look foreward to reading more by you!

KarriReviewed Chapter: 20 on 11/8/2004
A lovely wrap-up, R. :-D Now, when's the next story coming?

GalimerilReviewed Chapter: 19 on 10/27/2004
Great Ch! I'm glad you didn't kill legolas off. I would have been very upset! Can't wait to see how this ends! Write LOTS more really, really, REALLY SOON!
Galimeril ;D

KarriReviewed Chapter: 19 on 10/25/2004
:-P What a way to start a chapter! You had me worried there for a minute. A nicely written squirmish, though. I am glad Elrond managed to alter the vision and all our boys came out of it still breathing. Terrific chapter. :-D

mistry89Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 10/23/2004
II'm sorry that I haven't left a message of appreciation - I've been reading Immortal as it comes and should have said "Thank You".
The effect of Celebrian's torment on the members of her family, an explanation of the lack of maternal mention for Legolas in LOTR, and the reminder that of all the beings who have lived in Middle-Earth, the one who has borne/will bear the most grief is Elrond. It is all here in your story.

Of course, that Legolas features largely (and is one of my favourite canon/fanon characters) doesn't hurt!

Thank you.

KarriReviewed Chapter: 18 on 10/21/2004
Oooh! A simply splendid portrayal of Elrond the warrior. :D

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/16/2004
This was a really tense chapter - well done. I still have a very bad feeling that something is going to go wrong, and at least one of them will be badly hurt.


Jay

KarriReviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/16/2004
Holy smokes, R! I hadn't even had time to read the last chapter and here is a new one. Ack! Legolas doesn't sound like he is entirely in suitable shape for fighting, but I imagine the distraction of worrying about him is good for it seems to be keeping the twins for loosing it on the orcs. Two terrific chapters. :-D

KarriReviewed Chapter: 15 on 9/20/2004
*sniffle* A heartrending chapter, R, but wonderfully written. :-D

SheikanReviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/18/2004
Well I just started reading this fic today and I have so say, I am amazed but the emotional elements in the story. I feel so bad for Elrond and the Twins...and then Legolas being draged in watching his friends mother suffer when he has seen his own die. Its sad =[! I hope you update though! I wanna know what happens! ^_^ I just hope i will not lose the link for this x.x;;

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