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| Beauty for Ashes by Nina the powerwriter | 1 Review(s) |
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 3/19/2005 |
| Oh yes! It's good to see this chapter up at last! I *love* the paragraph you've added at the end, with Estella. It really gives the chapter more "oomph!" at the end, as well as a nice symmetry: we see Merry at the beginning, thinking of Estella on ponyback, and then at the end, she is on a pony as she rides away. Well done! | |