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| Confessions in the Dark by eokat | 6 Review(s) |
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| SimplegirlfromLP | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/2/2019 |
| Thump, thump, thump my beating heart. Nice, would love to read the rest! | |
| RangerGirl | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/18/2005 |
| Very cute, very funny. I recodnized your stories , your an author at FF.Net aren't you? Me too. Wonderful site isn't it? I'm Wenham-Wonderer at that site. Proud, screaming, insane David Wenham fan am I! Good, fic. | |
| EomerofEastfold | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/2/2004 |
| Hello Eokat, We all love Eomer, don't we? Lol, though, if I were to meet him, that love would be nothing more than deep rooted respect and admiration. I'd rather have Eowyn for anything more. :) Nice bit of work, though I thought they came around a bit fast. Not from disdain to closeness, mind you, but from closeness to intamacy. Also, it was certianly a unique experience to see Faramir break away from his coolheaded nature. :) You guys are all making me jealous of Eomer with these fics, though. Why can women not see me the same way, lol. *Sighs* Author Reply: Hello back Eomer, I do agree with you, I thought I had rushed it a little also. I might alter it in the future, so it makes a little more sense. But it will have to be later, am on holiday for 2 weeks so am looking forward to all the waiting fanfics when I return back to England. Will try to find an *Eowyn* for you!!! Eokat. | |
| Nienna Elanesse | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/30/2004 |
| Other than the false-propriety tone, ther is one typo: Elmer? Is it not *Eomer* King of Rohan? Author Reply: I do not understand what you mean by 'false propriety tone'. Also have altered the 'mistake ' in Eomers name, and yes I do know the king of the mark is called Eomer!! | |
| Snowballjane | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/25/2004 |
| This is a lovely piece. You've done a great job of the dialogue, getting the appropriate 'high tone' and courtly phrasing without becoming stilted or losing the obvious affection between the characters (both lovers and siblings). There are a couple of typos/missing full stops you might want to fix, but they didn't distract from the pleasure of reading the story. Author Reply: Thank you, I do love witing in 'Tolkein' style, it can be a little difficult though, trying hard not to put any modern slang into it. Eokat | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/24/2004 |
| It's funny how a man can make himself attractive by being both strong and vulnerable. I have to say I'd change places with Lothiriel any time! Author Reply: I agree Daw, I just had to have him feeling so, and I would also like to change places with Lothriel, any time. Eokat | |