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Long Home of Mortals  by jodancingtree 2 Review(s)
CalimeReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/23/2004
I like how the memories were peeled away and the core of Pippin's hurt was exposed and brought to the light. This rings so true, though of course we can't be sure how we will be totally healed. I like your ideas immensely.

Terrific!

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 7/11/2004
"It's as if the whole world we were used to, was only a dream, or a reflection in a mirror. Now we see the reality." - Jodancingtree

A reflection of one of my many favorite verses! Most beautiful!! I know I keep saying that, but it is the truth. And how you wrote of there being "houses along the road"...until I read this, I always imagined His mansion in finite terms--can't help it, I'm human. But no more; just now, you were His instrument to toss that confining idea of mine to the curb. Streets of Gold, Tall Messengers...fear being peeled away until it disappears. Thank you for sharing that.

Pippinfan

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