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The Song of the Sea  by BeautyID 1 Review(s)
Chathol-linnReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/20/2004
A bittersweet retelling of the stories of two traditional girls in Gondor. The writer did a good job evoking the sea images: waves, breeze, shells, sand. The characters of Finduilas and her sister were believable. I liked the technique of using failing handwriting of the letters as a metaphor for the fading of Finduilas. And I liked the name Earlindele. It is accurate enough Sindarin for me to recognize the meaning. Good job! Regards - Chathol-linn

Author Reply: Thank you very much for the feedback! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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