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First Second Breakfast  by Lindaleriel 11 Review(s)
Lily FrostReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/29/2004
Cute! Very sweet, an elf's first second breakfast is quite an event, isn't it? The title fits it perfectly.

DuchessReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/17/2004
LOLOLOL Very funny and cute! Loved it and hope to see more such wonderful vignettes as this one. *vbg*

LKKReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/16/2004
Very nice, Lindaleriel! The hobbits' eating habits must have been quite of shock for Legolas the first time he encountered them. I think you depicted the encounter wonderfully and quite humorously.

fadagaskiReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/15/2004
That was so cute! I loved how the style was somewhat serious, but the subject matter was utterly ridiculous (as hobbit meals are)! It made it all the funnier to read.

TinnuialReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/15/2004
Priceless!! Thanks for the laugh... You characterised them all so perfectly. Poor Legolas... what an experience!! ;)

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2004
I am trying to imagine Legolas "waddling" without success, but I am amusing myself in the attempt. Hobbits certainly know how to enjoy life, you have to give them that! Nice glimpse of two contrasting bits of culture.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2004
Poor Legolas. The hobbits must be rather a shock to his genteel elven sensibilities.

I love the amazement of elf / hobbit acquaintanceship.

RhiannonReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2004
Cute story. Poor Legolas, what chance did he have against 4 hungry hobbits???

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2004
p.s. I can certainly understand the kitchen being thrown into *confusion* by the actions of four hobbits!

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2004
A delightful little ramble through a hobbity morning.

My only question: would the kitchen staff truly have been confused? After all, Bilbo had been living there for years.

Other than that niggling little detail (sorry) I must admit I chuckled my way through the piece. Thanks!

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