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The Fellowship  by Meldewen Ilce 5 Review(s)
Hobbit Lass21Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/1/2005
Oh...*is speechless for several moments* Wow. It's..beautiful. Magnificent. Clever. Not to mention, so, so true.... *walks off in silence, still musing over the words*

ElvenFairMaidenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/29/2004
Wow! These poems are great...I am writing a whole series of the thoughts of the Fellowship during their long and tiresome journey to Mount Doom. You have a good talent in writing poetry, keep it up!

Author Reply: Why thank you!

I have another series (albeit only 4) poems finished that I will be posting soon...Please do read the other Fellowship poems and the new ones as well and please let me know what you think!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/28/2004
Oooh, nice. You give us an adult, thoughtful Frodo, making the only choice he could make.

Author Reply: Thank you, shirebound, for your review!

Author Reply: P.S. - Please do read and review the other poems I have posted!

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/18/2004
Hullo, did you delete the former story? I was sure I'd left reviews before, and that there were more chapters. No matter. I am enjoying this piece all over again (if it is the one I saw before. If not, don't mind my ramblings)

I see you've been refining your work. These lines grabbed at my heartstrings:

“This peace will not last.”
So says his heart while gazing
At the calm valley

“Soon I must depart
And face peril unknown but
do so willingly.”


Author Reply:

Nope, I did not delete the former story - I have not taken The Fellowship set down since I began publishing them Sunday...

And thank you - I am trying to make each haiku better, and more conforming to the 5-7-5 rule - to say nothing of making of trying to make the words grab the readers more...


OakWolfReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/15/2004
Well done,I cant wait for the rest of the fellowship. might you allow your readers a preview or two?

Author Reply: Oakwolf:

Thanks for reviewing the first chapter of "The Fellowship"...

I just wanted to say thank you and to tell you I have completed chapters for the remaining members of the Fellowship.

Most likely I will be posting the chapters over the next week or so, so do be on the lookout!

Thanks again and I hope you'll read and comment on each chapter!

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