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| Grey Shores and Other Poems by Meldewen Ilce | 6 Review(s) |
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| OakWolf | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/18/2004 |
| ROFL-was wondering if someone would adress the Weaving issue, | |
| Beren | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 5/14/2004 |
| I loved the last haiku, specially the last verse, it was really moving! Author Reply: Thank you, Beren! | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/13/2004 |
| Very nice, contrasting the three births. Nice progression. How about something like: Merry surprised them-- Esmeralda was "barren"! Brandybucks rejoiced. | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/13/2004 |
| Very poignant. The last grouping is especially telling. We suffer loss... and move on with life. (Still, things are never *quite* the same, are they?) | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/13/2004 |
| Whew! Glad you put in that explanatory note! Otherwise I might have thought you were casting aspersions on us reviewers! Author Reply: LOL - not by any means do I mean my reviewers but rather these crazy critics who obviously have never read the trilogy! | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/13/2004 |
| These are lovely. (They don't all conform to the strict 5-7-5 rule of haiku, but that doesn't take away from their beauty.) I especially like the first one. Author Reply: Thank you, shirebound, I tried to stay within the 5-7-5 rule but obviously I was a bit tired when I wrote "Grey Shores". Anyway, I hope to improve myself, and perhaps be able to stay within the 5-7-5 rule but if not I hope to convey some of the ideas I have with the words I choose. Thanks again and I look forward to more of "Mind To Mind"! | |