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Blanketed in Love  by TopazTook 2 Review(s)
Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/17/2004
Why thank you so much for the mention of "Thinking of You" and for another wonderful chapter. For a minute there, I thought Merry and Pip might get shot with that arrow, but I was relieved to see that didn't happen. Your Merry is doing a wonderful job of helping Pippin recover. I laughed during the barn and cow scene, but until I read your kind acknowledgement at the end of the chapter, I didn't see the connection. Seems no matter what Merry plays with, he has an order for it. I also liked how Pippin thought about the ball and then Merry began to play with it. It shows the deep connection between the two of them very well. I look forward to more.

Author Reply: Thank you. That was the point of the ball -- to show that deep connection.

shana40347Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/17/2004
really,love this story. I feel for merry, he is so concerned for pippin. Poor pip,he is locked inside and can't seem to find a way out...Good job....

Author Reply: Thanks again for your kind reviews.

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