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Cadenza  by Rose Sared 6 Review(s)
TithenFeredirReviewed Chapter: 13 on 11/25/2005
Oh, things look grim, but help, (and some serious vengeance), are on the way. Good tale! ~TF

Author Reply: Thank you for hanging in there! RS

merReviewed Chapter: 13 on 6/2/2004
Another person here who is enjoying this story. I noticed one of your characters ("Camthalion") has the same name as another elf in a story by someone called Runedancer. Is Camthalion a canon name or is it just by coincidence? I am very much looking forward to the next chapter. I loved reading all your other stories as well!

Author Reply: Thank you so much for your review mer. At times it seems like I only have my loyal three or four readers, then another one pops up to say something and it is like an unexpected gift, most welcome.
I am afraid Camthalion's name was generated by the name machine hosted by the Mellon chronicles. Put in some name like George and up pops an elvish sounding one! I spent many weeks researching Sindaren sites and dictionarys to find Minuial and Ascallon's names, only to find Minuial is so common it is nearly canon and Ascallon may not mean what I wanted it to! So now I hie me to the generators, and get caught! Ha!
Thanks a lot for your attention to detail.
Ch 14 as soon as poss
Rose

lwarrenReviewed Chapter: 13 on 6/2/2004
RS, yea!! An update...was really getting worried! *vbg* Of course, then I read it and am now hanging in the limbo of "in between battle and rescue", and it's not a comfortable place to be! :0 I thought Minuial sneaking into Edoras with her friends very tense...and poor Aragorn! That was also an interesting development about what will happen to the rule of Rohan should Elfwine not regain control of Edoras. And Gimli and Legolas...sigh!...entertaining as usual, those two! Poor Gliver...but I liked that line about how he copes...*g*. So, those stupid hillmen held a knife to the baby to ensure cooperation....sounds like they need to be dealt with slowly and painfully...and SOON! *snicker...did ya get the hint, huh????* Can't wait for the next update...bring on a PO'd Thranduil AND Aragorn AND Gimli AND Legolas...AND...ah, you understand! Great chapter...would enjoy more if not holding breath! ;)

linda

Author Reply: Linda, you have no idea how lovely it is to hear from you again. I missed your cheery reviews, then realised I had to write another ch to get one!
Try not to hold your breath, mainly because if you think this ch is suspensful just you wait for 14. I promise I am writing 15 even as I type, seeing as how if I rack up the tension much more my head might pop!
Thanks, as always, for your loyal reviews
Rose

tintalle1Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/31/2004
Good to have you back, rose. keep them coming, I am getting pretty worried that Gleowyn will get herself killed if Arwen doesn't keep her from attacking Frecern.

Author Reply: Yes this story is getting very dangerous, and for who gets killed, ummmm. The next chapter is on its way, though it needs lots of thought to write it properly.
Thanks for the review
Rose

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/30/2004
Oh, poor Aragorn - mind you, I would not want to cross him just now, or be one of those who has taken Arwen. I hope the next chapter will see all our heroes in action to rescue wife/sister/friend.


Jay

Author Reply: Yep, action abounds in the next chapter. I am just struggling a bit with the dreaded POV question. Its coming together in my head at last so I hope there won't be too long a gap before another update.
Thanks for the support
Rose

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/29/2004
"Think you Gliver could cope without you?”

Gimli grinned openly now. “It is how he copes best..."

I loved these lines!

Somehow I missed the last update. This is very tense. All of those who can help are on their way or waiting, and I think that this kind of before-the-action moment is the worst.


Author Reply: Yes, and if you want tense you should look inside what I laughingly call a mind . I am trying to work out how best to tell the story of what happens next. Don't worry, I do know what happens next, but the telling of it is another thing entirely!
Hope to update as soon as the muses deign to tell me in which sequence they would like to take the stage.
Thanks for your enjoyment of my world
Rose

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