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An Act of Betrayal  by Manderly 1 Review(s)
FirnsarnienReviewed Chapter: 11 on 5/12/2004
Yes, most definitely! I agree! Hmmmm, I wonder if Tolkien even mentions that Leggy is one of the youngest Elves, one of the last born before evil took hold of the land. I know I've heard it somewhere. Well, I know for sure Leggy is portrayed this way in a few other fanfics, so yeah, I think him being so young (for an Elf) would be part of the reason he is so open to new ideas and so curious about the world around him. :)

Now, on to the story! :) As for Yulion, I was almost glad Aldeon and Feren had bad news for him! His arrogance and disregard for the hurt he'd caused made me absolutely livid! Leggy is still lying hurt and half dead, and all he can do is be arrogant and snippy!? Arrrrrg! Call me perverted, but I got a sense of pleasure seeing him crumple in grief at the sight of his family! :P Pooh on him! And I'd like to see his face when he realizes he has indeed, been betrayed by the very men he thought would help him! Double pooh on him!

Aw! Nice touch having Hesin watch over Legolas while Feren and Aldeon informed Yulion of the demise of his family! Hmmmm, I wouldn't be surprised if Hesin is appointed Legolas new protector when they return home and things get back to normal. :)

Ai! Heart pangs, heart pangs! Leggy's fear is so touching! I thought he was gonna have a panic attack when he thought Ambartur and Meldon were close by. And I love, just love, how Feren and Aldeon try to comfort him and make him feel safe! It makes my heart smile! ;) *sigh* Heh, heh, and see, not even they can deny Leggy anything! That sure explains why the rest of us are just...lost when it comes to that beautiful blond Elf! LOL

Well, another wonderful chappy! And as usual, it leaves me craving more. ;) I can't wait! :) Hurry!

BTW...your quite welcome for the reviews. :) I always try to point out things that have really touched me instead of just saying, "Cool!" or "Great story!" Seems more helpful this way and perhaps, a bit more inspiring! :)



Author Reply: Yulion has lost his family, which is probably punishment enough. But Thranduil hasn't got to him yet and I don't think the king will let him off easily once he sees the state of his son. I'm still trying to work out what Thranduil will do to the traitors.

Legolas has a way to go yet with his recovery and I am sure the nightmares won't stop any time soon. Hmm, more angst!

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