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| An Act of Betrayal by Manderly | 3 Review(s) |
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| Firnsarnien | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 5/9/2004 |
| Aaaaah! I just got back and I see that nothing has changed these last two chapters! Still horrible cliffies! :P Oh my, first he gets beaten by his Elven captors and now he's getting beaten by these Easterlings?! He's gonna be a mess when Aldeon and Feren finally find him! I sure hope they find him soon! Make them move faster, please! And you too, type faster! Post faster! Hurry! ;) LOL Author Reply: I hear you, typing as fast as I can. Aldeon and Feren really need to show up soon or there won't be much left of their brother for them to rescue. | |
| rikwen | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 5/9/2004 |
| Yikes, Legolas keeps getting the crap beat out of him. But he appears a strong elf, hope that he manages to maintain his defiance through all this. And I hope the brothers are going to find Legolas before he and his captors get too far away from Mirkwood. There are not many elves and a lot of men to fight. Give Legolas his freedom and a knife and I feel he may even the odds a little. Can't wait for the next chapter. Author Reply: Legolas is really getting the rough treatment here, isn't he? I suppose the ordeal will help him mature, if it doesn't traumatizes him for life first. He is defiant, but he is also very young and has been sheltered all his life. I think he needs his brothers to show up soon. Let me work on that. | |
| Hisie Lome | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 5/9/2004 |
| Wow! What will the king do? I know the brothers will not show mercy....So some elves did not learn after the kinslayings...This will only get better! Update soon....this princling is truly a child no longer. Minna Sedh, Hisie Lome Author Reply: Given the choice, I don't think Thranduil will show mercy either, though his hands are rather tied, being the king. The brothers will kick butt for sure, I think. No, the princeling is no longer a child, though I don't think Legolas was quite prepared to be yanked out of childhood in such a brutal way. | |