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Number Two Son  by French Pony 1 Review(s)
daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/16/2004
You made very clever use of Denethor at the Palantir in this chapter. What he sees gives us a panoramic view of the battle that then gets balanced off by the close in view of Faramir.

I also liked the way that Faramir and Boromir worked together to reconstruct the rhyme. They are less at odds over who will go seek for Imladris than they are in many stories, and I liked that too. It made me look at them a little differently.

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