| The Touch of Sight by LAXgirl | 2 Review(s) |
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| Anonymous | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/22/2011 |
| This is a really interesting story so far, but I've detected one HUGE plot problem in it: Legolas was only in a coma for four years, but you said five. From 1421 to 1425 is four years... |
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| alysha | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/29/2004 |
| Hey, you probably aren't even looking at reviews for this story anymore, but for your future stories: I wish you hadn't told me that he was gonna wake up. When you do that, it packs less of a punch when you read the part where he actually does wake up. But it's definitely one of the better stories out there, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
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