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Wizard  by M. Sebasky 6 Review(s)
Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/3/2015
Great story. I had never really thought of it this way before- that Denethor is as much a victim as anyone else.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/23/2004
I really loved this. Gandalf must have one of the most interesting stories of all, and yet he is so rarely heard. And the hobbit intrusion brings balance.

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/21/2004
This is deep, quiet and elegant. Wonderfully done! Thank you.

Author Reply: Thank you very much!

HaiReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/21/2004
Wow, that was great the way you wrote from Gandalf's POV! I had never thought about hime feeling guilty taht Denethor parished, but I guess being the noble wizard he is it would be natural. It was very good, thank you!

Author Reply: I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading.

SphinxReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/21/2004
Denethor watched his sons die over and over again until he found it better to burn than live a moment longer. The man could not live with everything he ever knew lost, with everyone he ever loved destroyed.

Well-written. You used the style that PoTD has, and it works brilliantly. I can never imagine an eloquently angsting Gandalf. The short, crisp almost painfully precise prose (Alliteration?;}) is the real winner here.

And as is befitting, the end is without hope, but not without redemption. Narya at work, perhaps?

I really did like it, despite the hobbit intrusion. :)


Author Reply: I love your alliteration.

Sorry 'bout the hobbits. They just show up. ; )

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for commenting and offering your insight. I appreciate it.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/20/2004
Wonderful. What a beautifully written piece!

"Somewhere under the eastern pall, the fate of the world swings upon on a golden chain."

You truly bring us into the heart and mind of Gandalf; I've never seen it done better.

Author Reply: Why, thank you so much! You are kind to say so and I appreciate the time you took to read.

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