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From Princeling to Warrior  by Manderly 1 Review(s)
FirnsarnienReviewed Chapter: 8 on 4/22/2004
*sob, sniff, sniff, hiccup, sniff, sob* That was so sad! Poor Leggy, he's three steps from death's door isn't he? Or is it two? :O Oh, I just loved that touching little scene between the brothers at the end of this chappy. The love Feren has for Legolas is clearly evident. I don't know who cried harder, Feren or me!

Eeep, please make sure Feren is *very* careful. Legolas would surely fade if his brother was killed in battle and he, he couldn't have taken the arrow for nothing. So please, keep him safe! Leggy too! And while I'm at it, I've really started to take a liking to Hesin! Please keep him safe too! ;)

The blood, the blood! There's so much of it! I can feel it slipping through my fingers even! Blech, not a pretty sight. Wonderful imagery in this chappy though my only complaint is that it wasn't 50 pages long! LOL

Hurry with the next chappy! And I do mean hurry! See, I'm insatiable, aren't I? ;) Heh,heh! Yup, that's me, never satisfied! LOL

Author Reply: It's hard to decide who to feel sorry for more, Legolas or Feren in this chapter. I think both will have a pretty tough road ahead. Yes, Feren is a pretty nice brother to have, I think. I wouldn't mind having an older brother like him. The next chapter should be up soon.

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