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From Princeling to Warrior  by Manderly 3 Review(s)
Elf_Girl_EdhelannaReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/22/2004
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGHHHHHHHH!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
fix him up fix him up NOW!! Don't leave him with an arrow in his back!!!
*sobs*

Author Reply: The arrow will be out but I don't know whether you will feel the relief that you are looking for. Legolas is in for some difficult time yet.

FirnsarnienReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/22/2004
Oh my gawd! How did I miss these two chappies? Aaaaah! That cliffy at the end of 7 was absolutely dreadful! Oh good grief! How could you leave it there? That was horribly mean! MEAN! M.E.A.N. I tell you! :P You've got to write and post the next chappy at least by tomorrow. Otherwise, I think I may plop over in a dead faint! Hey, are you taking lessons in Cliffy school? LOL

I really liked this chappy a lot! I loved how Legolas rode with his brother so he could rest. That was such a nice little touch. Ah, poor Leggy, so eager to prove his worth in battle and his brothers want nothing more than to keep him safe and far from danger. He's just too precious to allow him to take any risks.

But, I guess Legolas wasn't thinking of that at all when he jumped in front of that arrow intended for his brother. He never does think, he just acts when someone he loves is in danger. That is what I love about him. He wears his heart on his sleeve despite his best intentions not to. :) *sigh*

I'm placing faith in you that you won't be one of those authors that kills off a main character. You won't will you? I'm hoping Leggy recovers fully, but I still wouldn't mind "a little" angst, hurt and comfort while he does! Heh, heh!

Ok, enough chatter from me. Get writing and posting fast! :)

Author Reply: Like I have said to another reviewer, I didn't realize I had created a cliffhanger until it was mentioned - I just thought that it was a good place to end the chapter. However, the next chapter is up now, so hopefully I didn't leave you hanging there for too long. Yes, Legolas is quite the impulsive, but lovable elf. He's probably the type that you can't stay angry with for too long. Enjoy the new chapter. And thanks for your wonderful reviews!

AlyReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/21/2004
Evil, Evil Author!!! How could you leave us hanging like that!!!?? It's just cruel! If you can't tell, I've really gotten into your story and I'm enjoying it alot! Keep up the wonderful writing and hopefully an update will be in the near future for us story hounds. ;)

Author Reply: I'm sorry to keep you hanging like that. When I wrote the chapter, I hadn't realized that I have created a cliffhanger. I just thought it was a good place to stop. But fear not, the next chapter will be up very shortly. Thank you for your review.

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