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Magnificent  by Pervinca 4 Review(s)
Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/16/2004
I am glad that Diamond was able to confide in her firends. Now she might relax a bit more. This is a very good story. I am looking forward to more of it. Sounds as if Pervinca has plans for Pippin and Diamond.

Author Reply: Thank you, GW. I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I certainly *do* have plans for Pippin and Diamond, but I haven't decided whether Pervinca in the story will have some role to play. I suppose I should give her the chance to play matchmaker - she's always missed out in my other stories :P

- Pervinca

Hai TookReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/15/2004
I'm glad that Diamond told everyone about her experience! Now they will understad a little better things like why she doesn't want to go to Bag End! I love it when the house is crowded! It sounds like Crickhollow was just bursting at the seams! Very nice, looking forward to more!

Author Reply: It's good to hear you enjoyed Diamond's story. I was a little hesitant about how to write this chapter, especially considering I'm writing the full version of Diamond's tale at the same time. While I didn't want to repeat myself, I didn't want to make people read the other story if they didn't want to!

Should have the next chapter up very soon :)

- Pervinca

MeggieReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/15/2004
I love it! That is, indeed, a beautiful name. I enjoyed the interplay between Pippin and Merry in this chapter. It is a rare writer who can have them jesting at one another before it turns into a farce, and you have balanced it perfectly.

Author Reply: Thank you so much! :) I could never imagine that Merry and Pippin would not have any fights at all, but I assume little arguements and teasing like this would occur all the time.

I'm glad you liked Meriwyn's name. I've seen plenty of stories where Faramir and Eowyn have named a son after Meriadoc, but no daughters. :P

- Pervinca

Lyta PadfootReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/14/2004
Pervinca seems a more subtle matchmaker than MY relatives. She has pretty good instincts towards couples. The conversation between Merry and Pippin concerning their namesakes was adorable. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author Reply: Since I enjoy matchmaking, it seems logical to make Pervinca in my stories enjoy it! I've always managed to be fairly subtle too :P

I'm glad you enjoyed the little Merry and Pippin moment! I've been trying to remember to include moments such as this - after all, Merry and Pippin are so very close.

Thanks for reviewing :)

- Pervinca

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