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| Jay's Drabblets by Jay of Lasgalen | 3 Review(s) |
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| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/20/2004 |
| Celebrian knew they were coming! Yay! :) The image of the ship arriving in the morning's light was very evocative. the ship is sighted; sails shimmering in the early sunlight. Lovely word use. The alliterative S sound give the passage a silvery feeling. Well done! Author Reply: I don't know how, but Elrond and Celebrian knew they were coming. Perhaps it was Galadriel's foresight? One day, I would like to write this sequence of events as a story - there's so much more room for description. | |
| Karri | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/19/2004 |
| A beautiful scene, Jay. :-) Author Reply: Thank you, Karri. I like the thought of their reunion. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/19/2004 |
| Celebrian and her babies. Ahhh. How could they not have gone? Author Reply: Quite. I think the reunion with their mother, finding her whole and healed, would have been wonderful. | |