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Jay's Drabblets  by Jay of Lasgalen 5 Review(s)
BodkinReviewed Chapter: 99 on 1/3/2008
Oh good. East, west, home's best. I'm glad the shadows are lifting and they are beginning to see beyond revenge.

ellieReviewed Chapter: 99 on 12/16/2007
How very quiet, empty, and lonely for the twins. It seems that something is getting through to them about the importance of family and home. I'm glad they plan to not be away next time. Nicely done!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 99 on 12/16/2007
Yes, at least NEXT year they ought to be home this time of year; but they did set themselves to removing the threat of orcs from Middle Earth, after all.

Love this, Jay.

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 99 on 12/16/2007
Clear, and piercingly cold. Been there. And the first star, always a wonder.

Nicely done.

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 99 on 12/15/2007
This crystalizes a heartfelt moment, Jay. The image of the star of a cold night is one I recognize--the clearer the night, the colder it is. And the longing for home seems real.

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