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Jay's Drabblets  by Jay of Lasgalen 11 Review(s)
viggomaniacReviewed Chapter: 77 on 7/25/2007
Who could not love that? You brought a smile to my face.

elliskaReviewed Chapter: 77 on 3/10/2007
Hehehe! Yes, I can identify with that after many years of clarinet lessons. Poor Estel!

grumpyReviewed Chapter: 77 on 12/4/2006
Ah Estel trys to make music, one day he will get the notes in the right order.

Author Reply: I'm sure with practice (and help from Elladan) he'll get a lot better!

SeleneReviewed Chapter: 77 on 12/2/2006
O boy, that must really hurt the poor elf's ears. But I love the reply :)
I think more people have that happen to them; right notes, wrong order.


Author Reply: When I thought of that exchange (in a long-ago classic comedy sketch) it seemed just perfect for the scene I saw with Estel and Elladan. Glad you enjoyed it!

LiannaReviewed Chapter: 77 on 12/2/2006
That's so cute.

All of us who have suffered through the early stages of our children learning to play musical instruments can identify with this one.

Author Reply: Poor Elladan. He must have had to listen to a lot of Elrond's fosterlings mangling music!

KittyReviewed Chapter: 77 on 11/30/2006
*rofl*
Even if it is not from you, the last line is priceless and fits *perfectly well* here!
Elladan should make himself useful and bring Estel a smaller instrument, more fitting for his little hands. Maybe it wouldn't sound so bad then.

Author Reply: I think Estel just wanted to try Lindir's harp for once. Elladan will get the smaller one for him, and perhaps they will play together.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 77 on 11/30/2006
Oh, so sweet, Jay. Just not in the right order, eh? I see.

Author Reply: That's Estel's excuse, anyway! He'll get better with practice - and a smaller harp :>)

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 77 on 11/30/2006
I love that sketch. It's even almost as funny in retrospect as it was at the time! The look on Andre Previn's face - the deliberation of Eric Morecambe's movements. Not to mention his wonderful rendition of the Grieg.

And as soon as I saw the title, the immortal line pronounced itself in my mind!

Poor Estel, though. Being young and human and incompetent and surrounded by elves who had had hundreds of years to master skills such as harp-playing and sword-wielding. It's surprising his sense of self-worth survived it! (Must be down to good parenting from all those around him.)

The thought of scruffy Strider, who spent many long years scratching a living in the wild as part of his path to glory, as one educated to be an elven princeling is sad - yet, of course he was. I wonder if his hands were in a state that left him able to play the harp by the time he was king ...

Not necessarily in the right order.

A classic.

Author Reply: I hoped people would recognise the scene and title! The line was mentioned on the radio yesterday - and the whole drabble was born almost immediately.

Poor Estel could have been discouraged - but I can see Elladan patiently sitting down and helping him. I can see King Elessar playing the harp too - even if it was just for Arwen.

Thanks for the Preview - I mean review ;)

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 77 on 11/30/2006
Heeeee! Cute and funny. I guess Aragorn wasn't always perfect at everything he tried. Or at least not until he'd had a lot of practice. Great little drabble.

Author Reply: Estel is fairly young here, and the harp is just too big for him. And everyone has to start somewhere!

paranoidangelReviewed Chapter: 77 on 11/30/2006
Aw. I bet it did sound like The Lay, just if you were in Estel's head :)

Author Reply: Poor Estel. I'm sure, as he grew older, he grew much more accomplished. And leave it to Elladan to tell him where he's going wrong ...

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