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Jay's Drabblets  by Jay of Lasgalen 7 Review(s)
elliskaReviewed Chapter: 66 on 6/7/2006
taste in his mouth like scrapings from the floor of the barn where the hens roosted. and maliciously, deliberately sober

Hehehehe! Great! And yuck! This was hilarious. Half-elves probably have a little less tolerance, and it looks like Elrohir found the limit of his tolerance and passed it. Poor thing. :-)

Author Reply: The 'maliciously, deliberately sober' line was my own favourite. Elladan is enjoying this!

Elrohir needs to plot his revenge ...

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 66 on 6/6/2006
Poor Elrohir! That was very mean of Elladan. Elrohir will just have to assure that there is an occasion for a similar revenge very soon!

Author Reply: Oh, he'll get his revenge, never fear! I'll write it as soon as I know what it is :>)

Elladan's glee makes Elrohir feel even worse, of course.

FireReviewed Chapter: 66 on 6/5/2006
Now that sounds like a very serious hangover ;) How much does an elf have to drink before getting there?

Author Reply: Elves can probably drink a lot more than we can - but Elrohir just found his limit! I think perhaps some dwarves were visiting Imladris, and that they were involved somewhere ...

DotReviewed Chapter: 66 on 6/3/2006
LOL! This is great. I love the description a taste in his mouth like scrapings from the floor of the barn where the hens roosted but I think the best part is Elladan - very sober and very, very much enjoying this!

Never again. Yeah, right :-D

Author Reply: At first this was just Elrohir feeling sorry for himself, but it didn't 'feel' right. Then Elladan suddenly appeared, bright eyed and bushy tailed, and not at all sympathetic!

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 66 on 6/3/2006
Never again? REally? Want to bet on it?

Author Reply: Probably never again - or at least not very often. The twins have more sense.

EllieReviewed Chapter: 66 on 6/3/2006
I loved this line best of all, "maliciously, deliberately sober."

How great is that? Wonderful drabble!

Author Reply: Thank you! That was my favourite line as well. Elladan is enjoying this!

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 66 on 6/2/2006
Nice to know he had the sense to learn from experience! That's better than some human young men I know.

Author Reply: But they say 'never again' every time!

I think elves have more sense. For Elrohir, this really is the only time - though if Elladan ever gets himself into this situation, he'll make the most of it!

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