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Jay's Drabblets  by Jay of Lasgalen 8 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 65 on 7/25/2007
Even better than the last one!!!!

elliskaReviewed Chapter: 65 on 5/29/2006
Aawwww! And can you imagine Elrond and Celebrian when they come to check on them?! Too cute!

Author Reply: Elrond and Celebrían will probably wonder why they went to the expense and trouble of providing separate rooms in the first place!

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 65 on 5/29/2006
It was very kind of Elladan not to let Elrohir suffer the pangs of loneliness. Self-sacrificing. (Not.)

I expect they'll still spend most of their nights together for a good while. But they can have their own space if they need it - and they will grow into it.

Author Reply: It was kind of him to check on how his brother was feeling, wasn't it?

They will have their own rooms eventually, with a shared middle room as a study/workroom/lounge. I've also said in previous stories that if one of them is ever injured, they go back to sharing a room.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 65 on 5/28/2006
Trust love and brotherhood. I've seen this.

Author Reply: They're twins. What's more to say? (Although real twins have told me that they didn't have any such problems - they just left the adjoining door open all the time!)

FireReviewed Chapter: 65 on 5/28/2006
Somehow I think the twins will never really have a room completely for themselves. There will always be one sleeping in with the other :)

Author Reply: They do eventually have their own rooms. This phase won't last long :)

EllieReviewed Chapter: 65 on 5/28/2006
That's sweet! I can so see brothers doing that, wanting to be so big a tough and then of course phrasing it like Elladan was doing Elrohir the favor.

Well done!

Author Reply: Well, of course it wasn't that Elladan was feeling lonely, was it??

FayeReviewed Chapter: 65 on 5/28/2006
“El? I came to see if you were all right. If you were feeling lonely – it’s the first time you’ve been on your own.” He swallowed. “Do you want me to stay tonight? I can sleep on the floor.”

That was great, Elladan is so very kind. I also like how he misses Elrohir's complaining about the untidiness.

Author Reply: There was a line in the previous drabble about Elrohir not liking Elladan's 'clutter'. It seemed a good link between the two. Elladan is being very ... protective here, isn't he?

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 65 on 5/28/2006
Well wasn't that kind of Elladan? :-)

Separation for these two will be achieved slowly if at all.

Author Reply: Elladan was being very considerate of poor, lonely Elrohir, wasn't he? Do you think he fooled anyone?

I have it on authority from RL twins that they had no problems like this - they just left the adjoining door open all the time ...

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