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| Jay's Drabblets by Jay of Lasgalen | 7 Review(s) |
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| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 52 on 4/23/2007 |
| Oh! I love the impatience of Legolas! Perfect game! I rate the jumping up a resounding '10!' Author Reply: Some people have suggested that Thranduil keeled over from a heart attack at this point :>) I wish I could draw - I'd love to show Legolas jumping out of the leaf pile! | |
| TithenFeredir | Reviewed Chapter: 52 on 10/28/2005 |
| ...Fortunately Little Legolas was well trained and knew to call 911 when Ada keeled over clutching his chest... But seriously, that was so sweet! I loved the, "You found me!" bit. I can just see him undoer those leaves just itching to ambush Thranduil! ~TF Author Reply: LOL! I don't know if elves have heart attacks, but Thranduil very nearly did here! I don't see Legolas deliberately ambushing his father here. When Thranduil happened to walk past, then of course he had found his elfling. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 52 on 10/2/2005 |
| Aww. Such a sweet game of hide and seek. I love the way Legolas explodes out of the pile of leaves - and gives his Adar a heart attack. He's a good little hider - better, I think, than Thranduil expected. Delightful. Author Reply: Yes - Thranduil was expecting a more obvious hiding place. If he'd looked a bit more closely, he might have seen the pile of leaves quivering with laughter - but he didn't. | |
| Kitty | Reviewed Chapter: 52 on 10/1/2005 |
| I love the idea of Thranduil playing 'hide and seek' with his little elfling. And it is the *perfect* place for a wood-elf prince to hide - in the leaves! A sweet drabble! Author Reply: I like to write about Thranduil playing with Legolas, even though he's a busy King. He's a father too. And where else would a wood-elf hide? The question is, where will Thranduil hide? | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 52 on 9/30/2005 |
| A wonderful place for Legolas to have hidden himself. Lovely pictures now in my mind. Author Reply: I wish I could draw the pictures in my mind as I wrote this. Sadly, I'm no artist :( | |
| elliska | Reviewed Chapter: 52 on 9/30/2005 |
| I love it! Love the image of Thranduil and Legolas playing. And I love the image of Legolas jumping out of the leaves. Very sweet! Author Reply: I like to show Thranduil playing with his son - and being startled by him at times! That picture of Legolas jumping out of the leaves was one of the first parts of this drabble to come to me. | |
| Dot | Reviewed Chapter: 52 on 9/30/2005 |
| I just read this over at RMH about three seconds ago! This is lovely. I'm smiling in delight at the thought of Thranduil playing with his elfling and I just adore the image of Legolas jumping out in excitement from the pile of leaves (and the fact that Ada nearly didn't find him!). Now where's Thranduil going to hide?? :-) Author Reply: I'm sure that Thranduil could take at least a little time from doing 'king things' to do father things instead. You're right in spotting that Ada didn't find him - but it doesn't matter to either of them. I now have this wonderful mental image of Thranduil hiding in a corner of the stables, under the bemused looks of the grooms. | |