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Jay's Drabblets  by Jay of Lasgalen 4 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 50 on 4/23/2007
As a singer, I very much liked this - it is so true, at first all I hear is my voice, and then, suddenly, beautiful, another joins mine and I am transported. How beautiful it must have been - until Melkor.

Author Reply: I found this quite tricky to write - although I love music, I'm not in the least musical!

elliskaReviewed Chapter: 50 on 9/18/2005
Ooo, I like this from the POV of the Ainur. I've never seen anything like that before. Well done.

Author Reply: I've never written anything like that before, either. It was certainly a different POV to attempt, but I think it worked. Thanks!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 50 on 9/17/2005
Seen from the point of view of one of the Ainur--nice.

Author Reply: Well,it seemed a different POV to take. It's not like anything I've written before.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 50 on 9/17/2005
Goosebump-raising. The sort that make a shiver run down the spine.

Author Reply: Some music has that effect, doesn't it? I imagine the Ainulindale sounding high and ethereal, so beautiful it brings tears to the eyes. A bit like Allegri's Miserere.

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