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The Boundaries of Time  by Gypsum 12 Review(s)
julesReviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/14/2004
oh please update, don't just leave us here.... I confess I am one of those (I suspect many) who have been reading and enjoying this but neglecting to review. I am in awe of the detail you have put into every chapter and very impressed by the research you have obviously done. You certainly do paint a picture with words. Please don't leave our poor ranger here, we want to see him get safely to Mirkwood, rid himself of the loathesome Gollum, and then enjoy some well-earned rest (if that's not too much to ask). Don't make us (and poor Aragorn) wait too much longer!

bumperReviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/9/2004
this is great, a wonderful story, i have been reading it on fan fiction too, and cann't wait to read the final draft. oh an pay no attention to mat117, he goes arround saying he hates everyones stories.

striders girlReviewed Chapter: 9 on 5/3/2004
The chapter to this story was really discriptive! I love how you are able to bring the characters to life through simple description. You must have studied the world of Tolkien really well to come this far. Well done!

websterReviewed Chapter: 8 on 4/19/2004
Thanks for the update, it really continues the story along the path I like so much.

strider's girlReviewed Chapter: 8 on 4/19/2004
this is a brillient chapter! i like the description of lothlorien. the elvish additions are really good. keep up the good work!

strider's girlReviewed Chapter: 7 on 4/13/2004
once again the chapter is brillient! The elvish added in makes it feel a little bit more middle-earthy. The discription of Rohan is excellent. You must have studied the books really hard to bring the landscape to life!

ElvenesseReviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/10/2004
This is a realistic protrayal of Aragorn's searching and finding of Gollum, and I dread to think how he could have withstood 50 days dragging him to Mirkwood.

strider's girlReviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/10/2004
Once again such a marvelous chapter! The description is excellent and sets the scene well! I like how you've created Gollum: perfect! I can imagine his every move! Wonderful. Keep up the good work!

websteransReviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/7/2004
Delightfully heroic, and a fine portrayal of the Morgul darkness. The seamless blending of doubt, despair and physical poison is effective in conveying Tolkien's picture of the Black lands

strider's girlReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/6/2004
once again i love how much you put description into the story. Gollum is presemted very well. I like how you make Gollum Smeagol and then Gollum. Very entertaining story, keep up the good work! I'm enjoying this very much!

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