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On a Lighter Note  by Lindelea 10 Review(s)
Annis Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/19/2004
HAHAHA! that was perfect!

Marigold GamgeeReviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/19/2004
"That was funny- too funny," Marigold said, mirth seizing her throat as she thought of all the funny things she had read, in terms of the run-on sentence, Mary Sue spoof, and hobbit illness mockery, while her imaginary friend laid a laughter-shaking hand on her shoulder, and she chuckled softly into her pocket-handkerchief.


eilujReviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/18/2004
No, you've got it wrong. These are not *alternative versions*, but merely paragraphs from different chapters of the story....

eilujReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/18/2004
Please consider finishing this one....

eilujReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/18/2004
I don't read Mary Sues, so maybe it's presumptive of me to say that this is wonderfully-Mary-Sue in that throughout the story (admittedly a brief one) the focus is wholly and completely on Mary Sue herself. Frodo is only mentioned as he relates to her.

eilujReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/18/2004
Ow. That's awful.

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/18/2004
Read this and saw a very short Fabio as Frodo and Pamela Anderson as the Mary Sue! I suspect that her I suspect that her bosom would strain against most anything! LOL Very funny!

FantasyFanReviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/18/2004
Oh, that's so funny. I didn't know angst could be so hilarious.

Thanks for the little diversions. A nice end to the day.

FantasyFanReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/18/2004
There's a sentence for you! But I think you needed some semicolons and colons, just for bouncing-ball texture. Glad to see you were productive today.

LindorienReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/18/2004
hehe - brave woman! But since you are brave enough to put these here. I am following suit.

I really, really like this one, Mission Impossible, but Hobbit Angst has my current vote for favorite. The Shelob one with the perfume bottle was wonderful. Have you seen the movie, 'Alex and Emma' and the whole discussion about 'heaving bosoms'?

Welcome to the Darkside.

Lindorien

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