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| What is Crooked Cannot Be Made Straight by Nina the powerwriter | 3 Review(s) |
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| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/22/2005 |
| Nice story! It's typical of Denethor that he is concentrating more on his dead son than on the son who still lives, not to mention the rest of Gondor, at this point; this is where Denethor begins to sharply decline... | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/11/2004 |
| A good beginning. I'm looking forward to more. Author Reply: Thank you! | |
| Kitt of Lindon | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/8/2004 |
| You wrote in first person very skillfully. (I am very sure is called 'first person'.) And you did great at capturing the essence of the moment. I caught one little misspelling in the summary. It should be 'bears' instead of 'bares'. (I simply couldn't wonder off without telling you.) Cheers! | |