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Oak and Willow  by Marnie 2 Review(s)
whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/17/2008
I enjoyed the "culture-clash" scene between the Sinda and the Noldor very much! You captured all the right things indeed--from the flashy armor of the Noldor to their name-calling of the other elven kindreds. Poor Angrod foot seems stuck in his mouth in this one. I also liked Melian's counsel and you're able to flesh out the Doriathim very well.

Author Reply: Thanks for all your reviews on this one, Whitewave! I'm so glad you enjoyed the culture clash here, as I had so much fun writing it :)

elliskaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/10/2004
I love the interchange between Celeborn and Angrod. The play with language and names was excellent. Angrod's haughtiness and Celeborn's reaction to it were perfect. And I like the way you portrayed Melian's reaction to them.

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