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I Can See the Shire  by Iorhael 5 Review(s)
powerwriterReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/22/2004
This story is very disturbing...

Author Reply: :) I so want to discuss this. In what way do you find it disturbing, negatively or positively? I mean there are some who shocked with this but there are others who like surprises and thus glad to find them in this story. Someone told me this is the way I write, always full of twist and shock. But a suggestion to write a sequel might be better.

LilyReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/18/2004
Aaaw...that was very beautifully written...and it is so sad *sniff*. Poor Frodo not knowing whether he 's still dreaming or not *sighs*

Author Reply: Thank you, thank you. You're so sweet. I'm relieved you can accept the shocking ending. *eh, do you?*

Frodo_BagginsReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/4/2004
AHH how sad! How terribly sad! poor, poor everybody! aaaaah poor Frodo. *sniffs and wipes tear*

Author Reply: Please. Please don't cry. I'm sad to have made you sad. :(

But thank you for coming and reviewing it, FB!

Arwen BagginsReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/4/2004
Okay, that was freaky...and so real! I've had dreams that I thought were real and sometimes when I'm awake I think I'm in a dream. In the months after my Oma's diganosis of cancer, I thought I was in a nightmare. And one night I had a real nightmare that I was at my dad's funeral that I could have sworn was real. Then I woke up on that Saturday morning and went into the kitchen to find him reading the Sports page and eating a bagel. Poor Frodo, I'm glad Tolkein wasn't quite as hard on him as we fans are.

Author Reply: It must be terrible to have a real nightmare! I hope I won't have one and I hope Frodo won't have either. Yeah, come to think of it, Tolkien was much more too considerate than us fans.

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/3/2004
I am glad you showed how surprised and confused Frodo was to wake and find Gandalf alive. This is a very nice story. Love how Frodo comes in and out of memories and dreams and back to Sam and Gandalf. Very well done!

Author Reply: Thanks and sorry for the late reply! I've always thought he would be confused but I wish he didn't have to esperience such terrible dreams!

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