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| Let your soul be your guide by Ophium | 18 Review(s) |
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| Aranel of the Golden Flower | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/28/2007 |
| I'm going to review now, before I read the next chapter, because at the moment, it's all very intreaguing. can I ask what saruman took from Legolas? or will I find out later? any way I'm enjoying it all so far!! Aranel | |
| LenaLove | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 8/11/2005 |
| Wonderful story, very well written and beautifully described. I hope you write more, your writing of Legolas is just how I like him.....the blinding of him was strange but very well dealt with and handled. When he fell with the wounded back I was afraid you wre going to kill him. I am glad you didn't. Thank you for this story. I hope you have many more in you. :) Author Reply: Thank you for your review :D Yeah, the making him blind was just about the the thing that pushed me in to writing this story... the rying to figure out how an lef would deal with such constant darkness... the rest just fell in place around that *g* | |
| Legolass | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 7/28/2005 |
Ophium: I just read this amazing story of yours - it is wonderful! Imaginative and just superbly woven around book and movie verse and original ideas! Humor and poignant moments put together so well. Great job! If i have time, I will go back and review specific chaps - but if work prevents me from doing so - please know that I enjoyed this immensely. Author Reply: Thank you very much! Those words mean a lot for me, especially coming from you :D And if work includes you writting the rest of your story, get working! ;) | |
| Noor | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 7/26/2005 |
| Moving story.............and you write very well about the friendship between the "three hunters" Thank you | |
| Aloysius | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 8/24/2004 |
| I love the way you've added another dimension fo the events of the movie by having Legolas lose his sight - it's really interesting and very well worked out. Your characterisation is wonderful and I love your presentation of the relationship between the three friends. | |
| Bev | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 5/29/2004 |
| I thoroughly enjoyed your writing. What an intriguing idea. I can only imagine what Legolas would have felt blind. Keep up the great work! | |
| Isa | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 4/9/2004 |
| First I loved everything, really no complaints from me, ignore everyone who tells you something different. I so loved your story. This tale was beautiful. The characters, the plot, the interaction, wonderful. No flaws in logic, as I said I loved it, only point that I didn't like - the last word - END. That is the only thing that bothers me with good stories, that they have to end. Because if a story isn't good I never read to the end. And I say it for a third time, I loved your story. Write more soon. May your blessed feather always be kissed by your muse. Isa Vienna Author Reply: Thank you so much Isa! You know, I cant do that, the not reading the end of a story if it isn't good, because I always believe that the author, at some point, might reddeem him/herself... bad policy, let me tell you *g*, but cant help it. Loved your last sentence, and I do hope the muses listen to you, because without them, we're quite lost! | |
| Leaflet | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 4/2/2004 |
| This was just really reallly good, I enjoyed reading it, keep going! Author Reply: Thank you Leaflet! I'll keep going, just not on this one ;) | |
| purrlin | Reviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 4/1/2004 |
| Ok so I could blame the cat, the kids or the other half! but I won't tis my own fault for reading these things when tired. Sorry about the mis-starts for this review. Ok review? You'll have to continue now won't you. You've left us with Gimli and Aragorn given messages but Legolas hasnt received his, has he? I like the idea of changing things...maybe you can have Haldir survive this battle? That would be different! More tolkeinesque even! I do like. Please continue. purrlin :) (I never said I was computerish, just love reading!) Author Reply: Dont worry about the mishaps, I've deleted those, so your computerish-honor is safe ;) Continue this one... I dont know... Always enjoyed the idea of ending it at the beginning of such an important part, as the battle of Helm's Deep is. And thank you for reviewing, even tired as you were. I couldn't get a better compliment! | |
| Shaan Lien | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/31/2004 |
| Well, bummer, I was just getting into it. It is interesting so far, if not a little rushed in some places, but that's just my opinion, I'm a sucker for really long stories. Author Reply: Well, can't do much about the being short part, as this fic was never meant to be very long, but maybe the next one gets to be a long one ;) As for the rushed, yes, you're probably right about that, because I can be very impatient about seing where a particular story line goes, so, unconscioulsy, I might rush a bit, but I do try to pace myself when ever I realize I'm doing that. | |