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Twist of Fate  by Littlefish 10 Review(s)
OMGLOLpoprocksReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/2/2012
Lol
Love ur stuff. Update! I've been waiting. (evil smirk)

valjeanReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/30/2007
Good gracious! Why in the world did you stop!?

vampfan30Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/17/2006
Hi, Littlefish, excellent set of stories! They kept me on the edge of my seat & I've been sitting here so long,OMG, my neck hurts!!!! I see it's been a long time since you touched this one, such is real life.... hope you can get back to it soon, the tension over who Tervanis REALLY is is killing me!!!!!

Kathy_SFFReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/4/2005
I read all your stories in two days. I love how you are able to balance Aragon's love for his wife with his love for his friends. You have managed to keep the relationships between "The Fellowship" accurate, and add original (and believable ) characters. Keep on writing.

MordaenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/22/2005
hey, when are you going to update? I'm dying to know what happens next

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/28/2005
Hi, Littlefish! I was wondering if there's any chance of an update on this story - or has it been abandoned? It's been over a year ... :(


Jay

fliewatuetReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/11/2004
I finally managed to read the beginning of your new story (I was quite thrilled when I discovered you had started posting another story, but unfortunately Real Life got into the way). Great premise! I loved Tervanis' back-story. He never was one of those entirely evil villains and the little peak into his past revealed a vulnerable and compassionate boy. Though from your last story I remember that he had a knack for competition and I fear that might go ill as he seemed determined to compete against Elves.

For now I am curious as to his reasons for capturing Elladan and Elrohir (for I am convinced that it was Tervanis and his men who blocked their path and engaged them in battle).

BTW, since I now have more time for reading, you might well post the next chapter :D

fliewatuet

nessieReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/25/2004
Excellent Littlefish! It was pure coincidence that I stumbled upon this story, since I was checking Thundera Tiger's favorites for this sight, and then I noticed that you had three stories instead of two. And I thought, "Holy crap, where'd that come from?" I read Dark Horizons and Hostage of Hate, and they were both fantastic, although I haven't reviewed them. The Prologue was wonderfully written, setting the dark mood of the story. I'll have to wrack my brain however to remember who Tervanis (did I spell that right?) was. The second chapter was excellent also, starting with Elladan, which is always a plus. I wonder what he has planned for the two Elf twins. *Sigh* I feel forboding on Legolas's behalf. That Elf always manages to get trouble...Can't wait for the next update, and please, PLEASE don't have a cliffhanger next chapter!

MirariReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/24/2004
Gorgeous. Dark Horizons was a great story, and still it seems that your writing skill has increased tenfold since then. The action scene was tasteful and smooth, and your description of the Mountains and Pass so well done the place was palpable in my mind. I love your characterization of the twins; they seem less like the mischevious Fred-and-George-Weasley duo the general fanfiction community has made them into and more like two figures of grace.

Good job. ^^

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/24/2004
'One day I am going to write a story that doesn't have a cliffhanger ending every other chapter.' Hopefully that means you won't have a cliffhanger for the next chapter - but this one is bad enough! The twins are my favourite characters, and what you've done to them sounds very bad indeed. I like the way you've described Elladan's thoughts, and the way Elrohir is always there at his side - just how I envision them.

I have a horrible feeling that the next update will be a very long way away ...


Jay

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