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The Rise Of The House Of Telcontar  by French Pony 3 Review(s)
eokatReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/10/2004
Another good one. I think we are all looking forward to the birth chapter. I liked the scene when Arwen could not get herself up off the floor and struggled to use her writing desk because of her belly.I also feel there is more to come with the trade delegates, whether good or ill, will be interesting.

Arwen BagginsReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/9/2004
You have mentioned the Harad king's (what's his name) promise one too many times, and while he has agreed not to spill blood in the Evenstar's home, since he is a poisoner, I would expect him to resort to that. But the question is, what does Aragorn think?

I always wondered why Elrond and Celebrian only had three kids in a few thousand years. As for Arwen's child? Let's just say that I'm looking foreward to the birth chapter. This will be very interesting indeed!

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/9/2004
French Pony--

Could you please delete the strange review I just sent? :-)

Aragorn is funny here. He's so sure that he's seen everything, but he's lived in a world of men with battle wounds. The birth of his child is a puzzle even for skilled midwives.

And how odd for the midwives, who seem to have to keep all their fear to themselves. I suppose that makes sense. No point in alarming people.

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