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|Irrepressible Pippin by PIppinfan1988||4 Review(s)|
|PipMer||Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/23/2007|
|This was such a heart-warming tale, Pippinfan! I love your young Merry and Pippin, and how they help each other out even in their early youth. |
I liked how you fleshed out the character of Mr. Breddo, and how you showed that even adult hobbits can do some growing and maturing.
Your description of Pippin's boredom during a nice, spring day rang true for me; it reminded me of when I had to take chemistry in college in the spring semester, and the lab portion of the class was held on Friday afternoon! That was pure torture, and I could just feel young Pippin's restlessness.
|Grey Wonderer||Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/24/2004|
|This was very good and lots of fun. I am glad the tutor turned out to be a nice old hobbit after all!|
Author Reply: Good old Merry and Pippin are always full of charm and wit! No one can stay too peeved at them for long....
|Grey Wonderer||Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/24/2004|
|A very good beginning! Glad you continued it instead of ending at the one chapter. The tutor is a bit strict isn't he? I hope the lads have fun!|
Author Reply: Thank you! Yeah, old Breddo is a bit of a...jerkwad in the beginning.
|calenore||Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/23/2004|
|Oh, that's so cute! I love little Pippin stories; he's so adorable! I wish I could just jump out of the window at my school, but i would DEFINITELY hurt myself doing that.|
Author Reply: Thank you, calenore! Me, too, about the little Pippin stories windows. My schools always had three levels to them! Actually, I find it's fun to write about them as children; their pranks and misbehavior are limitless! Thanks again.
Author Reply: Gosh--one false move with the fingers and wham! An entire word is deleted! I did have the word 'and' between 'stories' AND 'windows'! :-)