Torn apart by Finda | 3 Review(s) |
elliska | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 7/30/2005 |
Another beautifully done story. The description in this is beautiful and the emotions are powerful. She did not notice the fine smell of that beautiful night, nor did she spare a glance for the countless stars, whose radiance lighted up her seemingly endless way. This really shows immediately how the sea longing has claimed her, if she is not aware of the beauties around her. And seeing her watching Legolas--I could really picture that scene, you described it so well. So sad for her, Thranduil and Legolas. Well done!
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Coriel | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/29/2003 |
Oh, yay! You sent her to Valinor, too! So much better than having her die. How sad that poor Legolas is oblivious; I hate to imagine what it will be like later. He and dad can work through it together, I suppose. |
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daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/28/2003 |
Nice story of a loving Thranduil and his lost wife. Poor little sleeping Legolas, not knowing what he is about to lose. |
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