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Snowfall and a War of Sorts  by Pervinca 4 Review(s)
GravReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/1/2004
Someday, I am going to read a story where Pippin is not charming, where he gets punished for all the things he does, and where he doesn't get spoiled rotten. A day of wolves, of shattered dreams when the age of Pip comes crashing down. But it is not this day.

Ahem. Anyway, this was awesome. I really do love how Pippin acts, and Merry and Frodo and Sam were fun too. And Gandalf? Loved it. A truly hobbity story.

Author Reply: Pippin not charming? I don't think it would be possible! I think I had the most fun writing this of all my stories. Once I started, I couldn't stop! It was for a "Winter Wonderland" challenge, and the story was only supposed to be 1000 words long - I think I ended up with 2500. Oops! I like having Gandalf and hobbit interactions, so he had to make an appearance! Thanks for your review!

powerwriterReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/16/2004
Such a cute little story! I enjoyed it very much :)

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/29/2003
A wonderful fun story, little sister!! I like the mental image of Gandalf in a snowball fight!!

Pearl Took

Author Reply: It isn't too hard to picture Gandalf having a little fun in the snow. Would he ever live it down if the White Council found out, though? Hehehe

Zebra WallpaperReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/25/2003
What a nice little wintery tale!
My favorite line:
“He won’t while you’re hidden behind me,” Merry snorted with a scowl. “It’ll hit me first! And besides, geese don’t have red feathers.”
I love when hobbity talk is captured so well, especially young Merry and Pippin.
Good job and thank you for sharing this.

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