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| With Friends Like These by Jay of Lasgalen | 3 Review(s) |
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| fan81981 | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/9/2003 |
| Er, where is the rest of it? I know there are more chapters. I want to read the rest of it - this is such a wonderful story. (However, I am not as fond of ff.net) What really drew me to this was how you maintain the humour without resorting to cliches, which I know from personal experiece is very difficult. I would say "Keep up the good work" but I know you will without my having to say so. (Makes me sound too pompous anyway) ;) I will say UPDATE SOON (the last chapter took too long) :( Author Reply: Too long? I try to post a new chapter every night! I'm transferring chapters gradually - it's easier to read, easier for me to revamp each chapter as I go, and I get more reviews! There should be a new chapter tonight, so long as I get chance to edit it. Jay | |
| Yuna_Dax | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/8/2003 |
| AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWww how very cute! Legolas is about to get it rather badly me thinks :) This is so cute - keep going! Author Reply: I don't think the twins will find out about the spider for a while - as long as he keeps that spider out of their way! But the tall tale he tells his friends is about to backfire. Jay | |
| sofia | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/8/2003 |
| i really liked this one. i think it was a bit funny how Elrond is going along with it. Author Reply: I like to write both Elrond and Thranduil as loving fathers, who can be strict when necessary, but who know when to turn a blind eye to minor mayhem. Jay | |