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Unblinded  by Victoria 2 Review(s)
MirielReviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/10/2003
"Goodness, no!" Elladan pretended to be horribly offended by the question, but his eyes were full of mirth. "We are big 18,000-year-old peredhil, Legolas! We can fend for ourselves."

That made me laugh. :D

You have wonderful descriptions of Elronds' house.

"Mother, you should be ashamed!" Elladan said from somewhere over Legolas' left shoulder, laughter in his voice.

"Why do you not hug all the young Elves that come to your home like that? Is there something you have not told us?" added Elrohir.

Heehee. "you have not" ---there is a perfect example of why your elves are believable. They speak proper English.

Wonderful explanation of Dagor Dagorath. It is entirely believable. Very, very well written. I actually thought that you had taken it directly from Tolkien!




Orophins DottirReviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/5/2003
Elrond with stock splits! *snarf, snarf, snicker!* I am really getting into this. Mayhap it will jump start my "Revenge" story yet again! I have been stuck on it for a time.

Melkor back! Hubba, hubba! He is just so deliciously evil. Back from the Void, we bring you MELKOR!!!!

Ai, Elbereth!

Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil

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