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In the Garden  by Strange Blaze 7 Review(s)
AJones Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/18/2019
I am hooked. So romantic. Hope you will finish this story and the other one. Please don’t stop writing.

endorearwenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/17/2013
OMG, Strange Blaze! This is quite possibly the most romantic chapter I've ever read! If this was intended to be your opening chapter to a much longer story about Legolas' life, I've got to tell you that I'm hooked! There is no measuring my disappointment that you seem to have abandoned the effort :-( Your writing style is beautiful, so filled with true emotion and sensitivity! I'm already bought in to your original characters, wanting to hear more about them and interested in the outcome of their paths! I know I'm coming really late to this party, but won't you please dust off your ideas and pick up where you left off? I have the other story you wrote too, but I'd rather read the chapters as you develop them than ruin the pleasure by reading too far ahead! Thank you for sharing this wonderful chapter with us. I do hope you can sense the enthusiasm my reading of this chapter has created and that it will rekindle in you the fire of writing your story about these lovely characters! :-)

DuchessReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/25/2004
Just noticed the date on this story and am now very sad. You're not going to finish this are you? *sigh* Well, at least I have your other story to read. *g*

DuchessReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/25/2004
This was delightful! I have to read the other one now, but wish you'd go ahead and finish THIS story first. *vbg*

nimrodelsongReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/3/2004
This is only the second fanfic I have read, and WOW! I knew that I wanted to read fanfic only about Legolas, and this was fantastic. I loved the elven thing going on; with him being in her thoughts and vice-versa. This truly was one of the most romantic things I've ever read. So beautiful. I'm looking forward to more!

Samwisegirl12Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/17/2003
V. nice, Strange Blaze. I know that you might consider this story finished, but you hinted at something that was troubleing Arahir. I want to see how this problem is solved. Did their Ada and Nana accept it at first?

MirielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/25/2003
Much better than any other Legolas/female elf story that I have ever read. It is well written, and I almost feel as if I become your character. The descriptions of Legolas inside of her were magnificent, althought the concept is very abstract I believe that you did very well. I am very interested to see how it turns out, obviously from your other story they wed, but it will be interesting to see how.

BTW, a Mery SUe is when the writer sends in a charcter to fall in love with the authors crush. The Mary Sue can do no wrong, is perfect, beautiful, ect. The story is ussually very badly-written as well. I do not believce your story to be a Mary Sue.

Magnificent prequel.

Cheers!


~Miriel

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