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By Light Beguiled  by AfterEver 1 Review(s)
Elena TirielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/18/2003
Hi AE!

I don't have time to read your story tonight, but I thought you might like to know: In your story summary, I believe that "effected" should be "affected". Though "effect" is also a verb, it's not used very often (correctly, that is), and I don't think it makes sense in this particular context. Hope this helps!

- Barbara

Author Reply: Thanks for pointing that out, Elena. Already changed. :-)
-AE

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