| Choices by Lindelea | 4 Review(s) |
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| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/16/2003 |
| I can't wait for more! The images in your story are very clear and I can see the injured traveling in the wagons as I read. I like that you included Frodo and the way the proper respect was demanded for the Ringbearer. I look forward to the next chapter. |
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| Hai | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/15/2003 |
| Oh, dear, how terribly tense! I always thought too much was left out of this part in the story! I love how you have written Beregond! I always found his character entriguing and you are describign him so well! I love how you wrote with flashbacks to when they were in Gondor! I like Targon! Very interesting story and just another example of how hobbits can worm their way into your heart! thank you for such a neat story, looking forward to more! |
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| Mysterious Jedi | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/15/2003 |
| Wow, quick update! :) |
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| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/15/2003 |
| That's a *very* insightful idea, and one I hadn't thought of -- that the air would get easier to breathe, the farther away from Mordor they travelled. Wow, Beregond is more than repaying Pippin for the hobbit saving his life. Such angst, Lindelea! |
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