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Long Awaited  by Cantora Eledhwen 4 Review(s)
Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/22/2004
*applauds* FABULOUS!! I am just starting to explore the world of LOTR FanFic and I must say I am extremely impressed!!!

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/5/2003
Cantora,
This was sweet! I do so like stories of Merry and Pippin's first meeting.
Well done!

Pearl Took

MarillaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/25/2003
Oh good, you've put the second chapter back up. And it's every bit as sweet as the first chapter promised :) . Where'd Regina come from, though? I'd be interested in hearing more about her, and why (in your universe) she didn't end up married to Frodo, as you seem to imply in this chapter. Although I think that they're probably a little bit too young for them to be thinking about getting married - Frodo's only 22 you know.

Also, if you ever think of adding to this story, maybe you could put in an idea of why Pippin is nicknamed that? It's not, after all, as obvious a nickname for "Peregrin" as Merry is for Meriadoc.

ChiggerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/14/2003
CUTE!!! So Merry has his "own" baby, now, huh? He let that new baby go to Gondor without him. Naughty, naughty, Merry. Still, I guess there's no arguing with a wizard over who goes where. A great story and I absolutely loved it. :)

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