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| See the Stars by daw the minstrel | 1 Review(s) |
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| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/2/2005 |
| It seems Eilian believes his father finds fault in everything he does. He loves him dearly. It seems his father dosen't expresse it to his older sons as much as Legolas. The son at the end didn't make him feel to good either... Author Reply: This is the first story I ever wrote. I stopped in the middle to write "Watch This!" but this is really the first one, and now I can see real rough spots in it. I was still working out characterizations and I didn't know as much as I should have about elven marriage customs. Still, there are places I'm pleased with. I hope you enjoy it. | |