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| Cottoncrow's Cry by Ophium | 6 Review(s) |
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| Sweet Pea | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/23/2005 |
| I love the friendship between those two! You have written both of them true to their characters and even added a bit of sensible movie verse. Poor Leggy. I would not want to carry Gimli for who knows how long. Small as he may be, he still looks heavy. But I'm afraid they will be seen as the two-headed monster. Stupid people! Your plague is probably caused by the fleas on rats or something! On to Chapter 3! | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/11/2004 |
| So far, I like it. I think you are doing a wonderful job with the characters. They seem very true and I like the relationship between them. I enjoyed the battle and their banter also. | |
| Iterildea Turelie Earrinde | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/11/2004 |
| I love it, be more clear and imformative in the 1st chapter.I still love your story so far,in 3months it'll be VERY popular.(I'm a psychic) | |
| Eruanna | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/1/2004 |
| Hee hee! Funny. ;-) That's about all I have to say for now. ;-) Keep it up! | |
| cavalier noir | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/31/2004 |
| your style of writing here leavres something to be desired.... not that i don't understand it, but it would be much more interesting if the events followed more of a storyline. | |
| Mirari | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/30/2004 |
| ...I think I can see where the two-headed creature is coming from. xD Just thought I'd let you know I've been lurking. | |