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| Immortal by Ruse | 4 Review(s) |
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| Nikara | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/19/2004 |
| Ahh!!! Don't leave off now! I want to read more. What happens next? Add soon please! | |
| Eruanna | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/16/2004 |
| This chapter did have some of the tone you would expect at the beginning, but now I understand, and it doesn't really detract from the quality of the chapter. I'm not too late for the cookies, am I??? ;-) You have such nice things to had out to reviewers. ;-) This seems to be a sort of transition chapter; the descriptions are well done, and I can only feel sorry for everybody. I eagerly await the next chapter! | |
| Karri | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/15/2004 |
| It did have that tone, actually. ;-) Very good, all the same. Heartrending. Poor Elrond! | |
| Frodo3791 | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/15/2004 |
| I think my favorite part in this chapter was your description of the cup. Sometimes it's better to say an action rather than to describe thoughts. It made this part more tense and different. I enjoyed that. *hugs Elrond* poor guy... it's going to be worse knowing that he can't help her Keep it coming. -Frodo | |