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Immortal  by Ruse 4 Review(s)
EruannaReviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/16/2004
*sniff sniff* One of those stories that it necessary for character development, but sometimes I *really* wish that this never had to happen. Man, I sound like this is nonfiction, don't I? ;-)

As usual, the "fight scene" was well thought out...I usually take shortcuts and say that Legolas grappled with the Orc and eventually won. ;-)

I feel so bad for the twins...how sad! And now we have all sorts of guilt, of course. ;-)

Frodo3791Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/9/2004
I'd think after Legolas' time with the orcs he'd need more than just a horse. The poor elf has been beaten almost to death so often, I'm surprised he can stand on his own. Elrohir and Elladan have come! To made that it doesn't make things too much better. I'm seeing lots of angst to come.
-Frodo

JoeeReviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/8/2004
Aww, poor legolas, he tried so hard. And poor Elladan too, all that wishful thinking was for nothing. And while I'm at this, poor Elrohir, in his heart he knew what was coming and was powerless to stop it. Poor everyone.

KarriReviewed Chapter: 9 on 7/8/2004
I'm very glad the cavalry has arrived at last! :-) I hope that Elladan really isn't going to take his grief out on Legolas. The princeless tried his little heart right out. Terrific chapter! :-D

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