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Immortal  by Ruse 3 Review(s)
FëagilReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/22/2004
Nice sad story.. please continue...

=)

Frodo3791Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/21/2004
Ah, I must have missed that. I remember something about the dead Noldor elves, but I didn't know he was hunting and found them. I must never have quite added it all together.

I enjoyed your comparison to Legolas' mother and Celebrain. I never thought to compare the two, but then again I never thought to put Legolas finding Celebrain either. It's interesting. They both get a little something from being with each other. She is able to take some solice that her children will be alright after she dies (though not unscatched by any means), and he is able to understand the love of a mother.

Nicely done. I look forward to the next.
-Frodo

KarriReviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/21/2004
*sniff* A depressing, but beautifully written chapter. Excellent work!

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