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| The Only Love-Gods by Melyanna | 6 Review(s) |
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| Fimbrethel | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 12/15/2025 |
| What! Imrahil does fake her death for real??!! and a Benedick and a Beatrice don't know about it?? I suppose Elphir can be the Benedick challenger, here. “If I am right,” said Lothíriel, “he will be punished enough by this.” Elphir took a step nearer and wrapped his arm about his sister’s shoulders. “You still love him, even after what he said to you?” She hesitated, but nodded. “Yes, brother, I do. I love him, and I fear I always will.” Elphir sighed. “I do not know if Father will allow him to marry you after this.” So it was her idea all along? Fortunately she is right! "So if Éomer King believes that you are dead and comes here. . .what then will you do?” “By then I hope our father’s messengers will have found Lord Nadroth and heard the truth from him.” Lothíriel sighed. “After that, it will depend on my Lord Éomer. Provided our cousin Faramir has not already killed him.” Ah. I guess Faramir is the challenger. Oh boy, the rumor of her death. Worse than grief. Ha! Éomer still loves her! Yes Éowyn! | |
| Raven of Rohan | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/17/2004 |
| My! This is cruel! Make him believe she´s dead. I wonder how you´ll manage to get Eomer to trust Lothiriel after such a prank. Do I have to say that I´m eagerly waiting for your next chapter?! Come on, give it to me:) Author Reply: Well, there are trust issues all around. ;) | |
| Hisie Lome | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/17/2004 |
| What an evil author you must be to leave us with this cliffy.... Well done. Minna Sedh Hisie Lome Author Reply: That wasn't a cliffy. ;) | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/17/2004 |
| Sigh. These two are going to have to go a long way to redeem themselves in my book. There are enough unavoidable sorrows in this world that we don't really need people going around creating their own. You do a good job of showing the tension between Faramir and Eomer. I can't believe Lothiriel or Imrahil would let Faramir suffer this way. Author Reply: Yeah, they're both being immature prats right now. :p I've spent a lot of time working out the resolution of this story, so hopefully it'll work out to everyone's satisfaction — reader and characters alike. | |
| eokat | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/17/2004 |
| Oh, what a place to leave it. I am sorry that Faramir is grieving also, maybe he should have been in on the plan? But I do not know your plot...YET. This is going to be hard to resolve, both will be very mistrustful of each other, Eomer always leads with anger first. Keep going. Love it. Eokat. Author Reply: I've spent a lot of time on this part of the plot, so hopefully the resolution will make sense. Hopefully. ;) | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/17/2004 |
| Lothiriel as Hero. I can understand the desire to torture Eomer - he deserves a bit of torment. But it is a shame Faramir is suffering, though. Eomer is in the early throes of lust and jealousy, but to Faramir she is the girl he has loved from her infancy. (If Lothiriel is Hero, does that make Eowyn Beatrice? She doesn't seem to the right qualities to me.) Good story - I look forward to updates. Author Reply: No, Éowyn's not Beatrice. It's actually rather difficult at this point to match up characters for each of the LotR characters — they're just kind of being themselves, which is, I suppose, a good thing. | |